rough essay draft2

What is the difference between young people’s Japanese and older people’s Japanese?


　Languages show social change, culture and history. Older people’s Japanese are

languages of a model social and an absolutism culture. However young people’s

Japanese are ones of non model social and a relativism culture. I explain these culture

but not sure. For example, people followed the emperor and liked same actions with

everyone in the past. However modern people don’t like same with other people and

like freedom. Like this, older thought is very different from modern thought, so older

Japanese must be different from modern Japanese.

　For example,“ごふじょう[Gofujo]”,”はばかり[Habakari]”,’かわや[Kawaya]”and”せっち

ん[Secchin] all mean Toilet. I didn’t know so many words about Toilet. Why are there so

many words about Toilet? I think older people hate vulgar languages as same as young

people. Toilet isn’t clean so they called Toilet with a glaceful language as possible as

they can. Even now, there are many words about Toilet-“Otearai”,

“Benjo”,”Keshoushitsu” and “Rest room”. Why were these words changed? For example,

“Gofujo” was used as a polite word. However, people used this word for a long time and

were accustomed to listen this word. So it was no longer a polite word for people. As a

result, the word has changed next to the next. Older people’s Japanese are languages

of adult and male social but young people’s

Japanese are languages of young people’s culture. For the last several years,some job’s

Name changed-from “Hobosan” to “Hoikushi”. A Hoikushi means a child carer. A child

carer was women’s job in the past. So a child carer was called “Hobosan” . “Bo” means

mother. However men recently has become a child carer. A child carer is no longer only

women’s job. So “Hobosan” changed “Hoikushi”. “Kangofusan” and “Kangoshi” are like

that. “Kangofu” means women nurse because a nurse was only women’s job. Now, a

nurse is no longer only women’s job. So job’s name was changed.

Like this, men and women’s social was divided in the past. Japanese culture was

predominance of men over women. However now the culture is disappearing.

Older people’s Japanese are culture of Chinese characters and words to write but

young people’s Japanese are culture of speaking and words to talk. Young people’s

Japanese are used to enjoy the rhythm to talk. So telephones and e-mail are used more

than letters. In the past, there were no telephones and e-mail so older people wrote

letters. So words to write developed well. “Haikei” –the first word of letter –isn’t used

very well now.

Japanese culture was changed very much so older and young people’s

Japanese have big differences. However both of languages are important for us , so

we must have the respect each other.

Decemver 3th

Hello!!

This year will finish in a month.

Time is very fast.

Today is my birthday!Yh!!

I like birthday.

I want more birthday.

I became 21 years old.

I enjoyed my 20 years old.

Enjoy your 20 years old!!

They are my boyfriend and me.

We are absolutly silly!!

Himecen

I went to Himeji Central Park last weekend by car.

I got up late about two hours in the morning.

At first,We entered the animal zone riding in the car.

There were many animals such as Lions ,Elephants and bears.

It was very exciting like an adventure.

We can feed to Bears and Elephants.

They were very cute.

Elephant`s eyes were soft.

I became to like them more.

I think they have wonderful power.

Class party

Class party of my high school was held last week in Umeda.

I haven't met almost people for a long time.

The woman next to me is our teacher who taught English.

She is Mayuko.

She love Verry Dance.

Do you know?

It is very sexy dance!

She went to all over the world for dancing about 4 months.

However She marrid.Ithink she got a good husband.

I listened her travel story.It was interested.

I think she is very very good because she is enjoying what she wants to do now.

When I will work and marry in the future, I hope to do what I want to do.

Dance performance

On september 23,I performed at the club with my team members in MINAMI.

We practiced for about two months.

However we was not able to dance very well.

So we decided to try again.

I love to dance on the stage.

It is so exited!!

What are you exited??

Introductory paragraph

First, the reason choose "Ploblem solution" is the best paragraph which I have ever written.I have confidence to this paragraph so I wanted to be perfect it.

Second,the reason choose"My opinion"is that I like this theme.I was interested in putting on make up in the train so I wanted to think about it again.

Finaly,I chose "Discribe a place"why writing this paragraph is easy for me and it had few mistakes.

Discribe a place final draft

Japan has the great four seasons by which temperature,stars of sky,views,foods,creature and clothes change-spring,summer,autumn,winter-.I think they are just some of good points of Japan,which has a lot of good points.In Kyoto,we can be interrested in Sakura in Spring,Momiji in Autumn.Especially I love Sakura of Arashiyama and Tetsugakunomichi and Momiji of Kiyomizudera.In Okinawa we can enjoy swimming in the sea in summer.In Hokkaido we can see beautiful good grasses in summer and ski and snowboad in beautiful snow in winter.There are a lot of nice places to visit in Japan and Japanese foods are very popular for foreiner as delicious foods.When I went abroad,i think so strongly.I like foods,people,nature and fashon of Japan.

My opnion final draft

Women shouldn't put on make up in the train.It isn't their private spaces but public ones.Some people might have no ploblem about putting on make up by women because putting on make up in the train doesn't disturb to around the people. It isn't loud like calling by celphone and talking with friends in the train.However other people must be hating about it because women putting up make up aren't beautiful very much.So it is unconfortable for around the people.I think most of women understand that and all women should understand that.However they do that or must do that because when they get up late,they have no time of putting on make up but must put on make up.So they cannot help putting on make up in the train.Probably they don't always dothat.I think they know putting on make up in the train is a bad manner and they should decrease.

Problem solution Final draft

Global warming is a very serious problem all over the world because it causes climate changes -especially rising temperature-.When temperature rise,ice of North of pole melt and surface of sea rise.When ice of North pole melt,animals of North pole -white bears,seals and penguins-can't walk on the ice.So they can't hunt.On the other hand,when surface of sea rise,some of small Islands will sink in the sea in the future.



One solution to the problem of Global warming is to cut down exhaust gas of cars.When we stop cars,we should turn off their engine.Secondly,we should set low temperature of air conditioner.If you set low temperature,you can exhaust less gas.finally,we should reduce gabages like papers and bulky refuse because CO2 is exhausted when we burn them.CO2 is the biggest cause f Global warming.So we must recycle and reuse various things-for example,plastic bag,PET bottle and so on- and we must not forget to use a thing for a long time. If people of all over the world cooperate,we may stop Global warming.

Suma

I went to Suma beach in Hyogo by car.

I go there every year.

The sea isn`t beautiful but the sky is very good so I like.

I like the house of beach and the mood of beach.

I can feel summer!

I want to be dark.So I put on sun oil and slept on the beach.

My skin borned.I feel ache very much.

I swam without Ukiwa.So I was terrible a little.

It was fine day but I quarraled to my boyfriend.

So I didn`t enjoy very much.

I will go in August again.

I must be fun!!

Problem solution

Global warming is a very serious problem all over the world because it causes climate changes -especially rising temperature-.When temperature rise,ice of North pole melt and surface of sea rise.When ice of North pole melt,animals of North pole-white bear,seals and penguins-can't walk on the ice.So they can't hunt.On the other hand,when surface of sea rise,some of small Island will sink in the future.



one solution to the plroblem of Global warming is to cut down exhaust gas of cars.When cars stop,we should turn off engine of cars.Second,we should set low temperature of cooler.If you set low temperatuer,you can exhaust less gas.Finally,we should reduce gabages because CO2 was exhausted when we burn gabages.CO2 is the biggest cause of Global warming.So we must recycle and reuse various things.For example,plastic bag,PET bottle and so on.If people of all over the world cooperate,we may stop Global warming.

Opinion draft2

Before making-up a woman is very different from after making- up her.Before making-up a woman is natural.She has clear eyes and high nose.I think before making-up is also beautiful.However,her clear eyes became bigger and her neck became longer.So after making-up face became cooler than before.I like both before face and after one.Then I think a lot of singers and actresses also use this computer skill.

Drinking

I went to Umeda for drinking with cram school for university entrance examination's friends on Monday.

We haven`t met for four months.I missed them.

My crammer life was very happy.I made a lot of good friends and a teacher.

We were very loud in the bar.We were very very laughed.

Lady`s exept me got drunk.It was funny.

We spent little three hours but I had a nice time.

We will travel somewhere in this summer vacation.

I`m looking forward to next 44 class perty!

Josh,Can you join us??

My Opinion draft2

Women shouldn`t make-up in the train.It isn`t their private spaces but public ones in the train.Some people might be no problem about making-up by women.However other people must hate about it.Because women like this aren`t beautiful very much.For example,when they face to put Masukara on thier eye hair.I think almost women understand that.All women should understand that.However they do that or must do that.When they get up late,they have no time of making-up but must make-up.So they cannot help making-up in the train.Probably they don't always do that.I think they know making-up in the train is a bad manner.So bad manner will decrease less and less.I hope so.

Firefly in Kyoto

I went to Tetsugakunomichi in Kyoto with my friend,Megu on June 11 which was her birthday for watching fireflis.

We have been there twice.We went watching Sakura about two years ago.

In arriving in Kyoto,we ate dinner at a Hawaiian restaurant which had Hawaiian BGM and a little dark.It was good mood!!

This picture is dinner of this restaurant.

It was volumy , good tast and reasnable.

Another one is in the restaurant.

What do you think?Is it good mood,isn't it?

After eating dinner,we went to Tetsugakunomichi.

We was not able to watch fireflis at first.However keep walking, we was able to watch them better and better!!It makes me relaxed.We was given power by fireflis:)

Discribe a place draft2

Japan has great four seasons-spring,summer, autumn and winter-.I think they are one of good points of Japan which has a lot of good points.In Kyoto, we can interested in Sakura in Spring,Momiji in Autumn.Especially I love Sakura of Arashiyama and Tetsugakunomichi and Momiji of Kiyomizudera. In Okinawa we can enjoy swimming in the seain Summer.In Hokkaido we can sea beautiful green grasses in summer and ski and snowboad in beautiful snow in winter.There are a lot of nice places to visit in Japan and Japanese foods are very popular for foreiner as delicious foods.When I went abroad,I think so strongly.I like foods,people,nature and fashon of Japan.

Baraka Draft 2

Why are we such different?We are human.We have two hands and two feet.It's same.However thinging things is so different.For example,culture,low and custom.I can look many different countrie's peole and tradition by watching Baraka.Especially I remember Indian culture.

It is that men make circle,hand up,shake hands and sing in India.I felt fantastic.I can't understand that mean.However I think it has means for Indian.I wonder that they pray thier god to be healthy and harvest a lot of crops.So it is natural for them.We have many such a thing in the world.It is interesting for me.

Baby

I want a baby someday.

When I hold a baby,I become happy and my feel become softy.

I think it has fantgy power.

When I become a mother,my baby teaches me a lot of things.

when a baby cry,I may not like that.

However I think crying babies are necessary.

Babie`s smile is special.

It makes me forget bad things.

This baby is my boyfriend`s brother`s son.

When I holded him,he looked me long times.

I was fall in love soon!!

I want three children in the future.

How about you?

Free...

Now,I went to the class room.

Nobody is here!Only my friend.

The class was nothing today.I was shoked.

Because it is first class.I wanted to sleep more.

I wait second class now.

My friend is sleeping with playing a computer.

By the way I sometimes practice to dance at Est in Umeda.

Do you know Est?

If you see me,please call me.

G.W.

I had a very good G.W.!!

On Friday,I practiced to dance all night in Juso.

Because I have the dance event next Saturday.

On Saturday,I danced too.

My body was very tired.I had a footache.

On Sunday,I went to Reggea event.There were a lot of people.Everyone was excited.

Arter that,we had dinner with my boyfriend and his friends at Gasto.

We went to his friend's house and drunk all night.

One of his friends recently married and his baby will be borned after two weeks.

Next night I had a part-time job.I was very busy.

I was very hard and tired.

On Wendseday,I went to the movie with my boyfriend and his mother.

We watched 'Red clif 2'.I like better '1'.However it was exciting and funny.

I wasn't able to get up on time today.

I want more holiday!

KARAOKE

I went to ROUND1 for KARAOKE yesterday with my boyfriend.

He is twenty four years old.

We will have associated for two years and eight months tomorrow.

We like Reggea music. So we sang a lot of reggea music together.

I was very laughed.Because he imitated some singers.He was similer to them.He is good at imitating people.I was very very fun.

After that we went to SUKIYA.I went there at first.

I ate 'Negitamagyudon'.It was good.

begining

I am Sayuri.
Nice to meet you.